Little Red Riding Hood

I have written the story of little Red Riding hood and I have used describing words. I have tried to use a hook, a simile, onomatopoeia to make my story interesting.It was easy. I think I will use more onomatopoeias.

Once upon a time there lived Little Red Riding hood and her very nice mother. They lived near a deep, dark, curious wood.Little Red Riding hood loved her Grandmother who lived on the other side of the deep, dark wood.Little Red Riding hood’s mother said “give this food to Grandma’’.  The wolf tricked little Red Riding hood.  The wolf locked grandmother in a cupboard. The wolf was disguised as grandmother.  Little Red Riding hood said these things “oh grandmother what big eyes you have”.  “All the better to hear you with my dear” said the wolf.  “Oh grandmother what big teeth you have”.’’All the better to eat you with my dear”.   Then little Red Riding hood yelled HELP!! Then a woodcutter saw the wolf and the wolf saw the woodcutter and when he saw the woodcutter he ran away.  The woodcutter, little Red Riding hood,grandmother and little Red Riding hood’s mother lived  happily every after because they never saw the wolf again.