Wednesday, 17 February 2016
The Fantastic Apple
I was learning to write a story with no words just pictures. I found this work easy and tricky the hard part was the beginning and the easy part was the rest was easy. I did well did well with the whole thing because joshua didn't have password. I think I did well don't believe me look at the story.
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You have some wonderful ideas and used descriptive vocabulary to write an imaginative story. I am impressed with your punctuation, grammar and spelling skills. Well done! Next time re-read your work to make sure all spelling is correct. Also sometimes it is hard to read coloured font on a coloured background, so think about your choices.
Good effort Peter and Joshua. This story sounds interesting and I agree you both used the pictures well to tell a story.
Miss H
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